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PostPosted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 6:30 am    Reply with quote

Heys.

Uh.

I write poetry. Woohoo.

So, here's some of my poetry. It is not about happy rainbows and flowers. Heck, even my love poems are dark. So... yeah.

Punish the Good

Punish me, my sympathies.
Agonize my inner mind.
My beliefs are saving me.
Little child, you don't need to know.

Ecstasy is breaking me.
Loving, now, is all I know.
Beating self; I'm good enough?
I just don't believe in me.

Hunger for the cold no more.
Running 'way to claim the day.
Bleeding back, nothing to lack.
The rapist dragon has been slain.

Gourd of gold carries sorrow
Breaking bold makes life show old.
Ancestors! O, let me go!
Please don't kill me now. I beg of you!

My true love, you've picked me up
Off the dirt of lusted worth.
You, know this, but know my lusts:
O! How I wish you would beat me.

Teach the babe still not to beg
The child hands you a rust-clad
Bottle of black, wounded doves.
The black sheep suffers prejudice.


Once Upon
I

Once
Upon a dream
You and i
Was You and I.
Now i have no name.
They took that from me;
One by one, they all began stripping it from me
Killing me,
Beating me,
Abusing me: The shapeshifter and the beast.

II

Once
Upon a love
You were happy.
I was happy.
Then we fought - idiotic nonsense.
I loved you, you knew that.
I thought
I thought
I thought i loved him.
I thought i loved you both.
I hated me.
You hated me?
You didn't hate me.
After that, love,
I hated me.
I
Wanted
To
die.

III
Once
Upon a moonbeam
You overprotective
Schizophrenic
Luminous
Bloodthirsty
Gelatinous
Carnivorous
Sun
Reflecting your desires in my moon.
I am the moon,
But
I
No
Longer
OBEY.

IV
Once
Upon a hospital bed
The baby's dead, the baby's dead.
No, no, there never was a child.
I cannot
Cannot
I
No
Cannot
No
I cannot have
Children.
I cannot
Have
This
Any
More

V
Once
Upon a suicide note
I confessed my love to you
Then took salt:
Dehydration.
Vomiting or death.
Vomiting sick white gobs of liquid salt.
Sickness the whole day.
Your tears stained the note
Stained our embrace.
I
Love.
i
love.
i love.
I love.

VI
Once
Upon a lesson
I is I, and nigh is no more.
The prophecy begins again.
The serpentine rapist killed my blood
Burned his mark into my wrist.
It
Was
Him!
No. Not
Him. Not
You.
Suffering: My true name,
Bleeding out sorrows
My past repeated again
and again
again
again
again
again
And i is I. I am no longer i.
He taught me that.
Sheer brute force taught me that.
Lying on the ground
stripped
cold
dead
Taught me that.

VII
Once
Upon dumb luck
I died.
Inside.

VIII
Once
Upon a love note
I confessed
I love you.
I confessed
I long for you.
I confessed
I need you.
I confessed
Everything.
i confessed my
love.
Unimportant.

IX
Once
Upon a realization
Death is cold.
Unimaginably cold.
And lonely.
I wish I was never born.
Then I would have never died.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 10:40 am  Reply with quote

Woah Semi, these are really good.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 2:28 pm  Reply with quote

These are... These...

Well, simply put, amazing.

I don't even LIKE dark stuff and I think this is amazing.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 6:20 pm  Reply with quote

Wow... you're really good! They scare me a little bit, but I love em!
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 12:33 pm  Reply with quote

Thank you so much, Awesome, Psy, and 4Ever!

New poems. Some are based on visions, and the one about cutting is NOT a true story... Visons 1 is too dark for me to post... not because of gore or anything, it's because it scares me...

Visions 2 - Peace Interrupted
Peace.
You are in peace.
See the kittens swarm
around you
calling,
"Mother!"
"Mother!"
Yet you do not know who lies
And who's mewls
Tell your own story.

Peace.
You are in peace.
See the aura
Rush from your body
Blue
As a
Summer sky
Robin's egg
Ocean tide
Patch of wind
Blue.
It rushes out your center
Like blood.
Awaken,
You are surrounded by blue.

Peace.
You are in peace.
See the unthinkable
Thought five times before
And three before that.
See it go in slow motion,
(Cherry blossoms falling,
Kissing your skin.)
See it speed up
(O, the pain!
A life in my mind)
And alas, it is merely
Gruesome
Where life should dwell.

Peace.
You are never in peace.
Not when
Visions
Snap you waking
When you sleep.
Not when
Visions
Exist.
Peaceful visions eat peace.

~ ~ ~

Visons 3 - Kitten
Spell out symbols with my fists
Not signing
Singing,
Bring him closer
Bringing It closer.

A kitten. A mere kitten.
It crawls to my knee,
Opens its sad gray eyes,
And mewls, nibbling my flesh.
It draws blood.

I do not fear
But if it is merely a
Spirit
Hallucination
Dead baby-cat.

It follows me,
Chasing my nonexistant tail,
Dancing in feline circles.
The music changes.
Wave goodbye.

The kitten leaps upon me,
Becoming me,
Becoming my soul.
I am never alone.
No, no.

~ ~ ~

Caution! The next poem contains cutting!

Wounded Tattoos
I

This empathy is killing me
Your soul is slick with sweat -
My palms slick with your tears
That I carved into my wrists

Heaven is unfit for me
I speak like I wish for it -
Nonbeliever! Selfish killer,
It is others I murdered with my pain.

Wrists are black and blue
And numb like dripping dewdrops.
Dewdrops - Nature's tears
That the world carved into her wrists.

Such beauty lies in death
The tears you cry like diamonds.
Don't cry for me, I will be beautiful soon.
I will be like the world.

The world is dead like
The falling of an unfit nation.
Who on this earth cares about those
That claim that none care about them?

II

Your bloodlust, sweet seduction,
Lies in yourself. I have
Carved neverending patterns
Into my wrists for him.

He does not want my
Many forms of love.
In desperacy I
Slit my chest open,

I spoke quietly:
"This is my heart. If you want this
Still beating, only you
Can take it and keep it living."

So he took my heart,
Making me beautiful.
But he did not rip it from me
Like the Other did.

He touched every vein,
Sealing my skin shut,
And reopening my chakras,
Showing me what love truly was.

III

I carved your
Symbol in my thigh -
So many curves,
So much detail.

You tell me that
I'm a Bad Girl,
But I'm
Your Bad Girl.

You say that with the
Tears I becan carving
Into my wrists long ago.
There is no room left.

Not on my wrists.
I moved to my arms
and my heart,
As you know.

I ran out of space
On my torso
For wounded tattoos.
I show my love on my legs.

The world is full of
Numb wrists
And black-blooded arteries.
You chose me.

~ ~ ~

And the "Birth, Life, and Death" series, which goes in reverse order - from Death to Birth.

A Second Creation Dies
Pain!

Bleeding, though not internal
Though not external
Though not physical.
It has died.

Not It.
A new It.
It always wanted to leave.
I never knew its name -

Suicidal reptile
I never knew
Whether you were
Iguana or chameleon

Or snake.
It cannot be a snake.
No, no.
He will not win.

Do you still love me?
It will never be brought into creation.
It will never be painted.
Its end is in my blood.

Empty voices
Converse in
White padded rooms
That I left long ago.

It!
Won't!
Stop!
Hurting!

Mother, Father - Sinner, Lover.
Mother, Father - Baby-killer, Lifesaver.
Mother, Father - Witch, Telekinetic.
Mother, Father - Inhuman, Human.

~ ~ ~

Golden Saint Light
It mewls.
A golden light
In a web
Of pure white.

Not indigo-purple
like my lover's.
Golden.
Like a saint's halo.

It is alive.
It. The real thing.
It!
It is alive!

Rejoice, rejoice, my love!
Dry your tears,
I am no sinner;
Not a murderer.

There's
Still
A
Chance.

Snow covers the frosted
Ground I dance upon.
My stomach freezes over,
Cracks in two like an egg.

Its life is released
From Its captor.
I did not know
It lay in wait in me.

~ ~ ~

Blue from Gold and Violet
Run along, run along
An aura is reborn
From violet and gold
Springs blue.

Like a serpent
The aura winds round me,
Escaping from me,
Causing me such pain.

I do not bleed
But energy.
I do not feel
But energy.

The blue light within-
Blue like skies
Like robins' eggs,
Shines no more in me.

Rather, it has been
Released into the world.
To live, to breathe, to be.
To BE!

What is its destiny?
To live? To die?
To be free?
What is It?

~ ~ ~

That's it for now. Sorry for the huge load of poetry...

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 7:56 pm  Reply with quote

You don't need to apologize Semi. These are really good. Each poem seems to fit together.
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 9:47 pm  Reply with quote

Needs more Jericho.

Quote:

The rapist dragon has been slain.


So like, are Rapist Dragons on par with Black ones in DnD? 'Cause let me tell you, dragons are tough as all hell to slay in DnD.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 9:51 pm  Reply with quote

MOAR JERICHO = MOAR JUSTICE.

That pressing matter aside, you should consider working on your rhythm because as of right now, your poetry seems to lack any remote sense of it whatsoever.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:11 pm  Reply with quote

Well, poetry doesn't need rhythm... As long as it comes from the soul, its good enough. Haikus have no rhythm....
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 4:51 pm  Reply with quote

Okay, I'm going to be the bitch here and say that ZOMGZ SOUL WORDS =/= good poetry. This is not a comment on you, Semi, simply TeenTitans4Ever's inference of the fact that anything that "comes from the soul" is automatically poetry, because it is not. There needs to be a rhythm to the words; the best haikus DO have at least a feeling of flow to the words.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 3:58 pm  Reply with quote

SushiChica wrote:
Okay, I'm going to be the bitch here and say that ZOMGZ SOUL WORDS =/= good poetry. This is not a comment on you, Semi, simply TeenTitans4Ever's inference of the fact that anything that "comes from the soul" is automatically poetry, because it is not. There needs to be a rhythm to the words; the best haikus DO have at least a feeling of flow to the words.


Ya know what? You're a lot older and smarter than me, so I'm just gonna shut up and agree with you Smile Sorry I was being stupid.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 3:37 pm  Reply with quote

SushiChica wrote:
That pressing matter aside, you should consider working on your rhythm because as of right now, your poetry seems to lack any remote sense of it whatsoever.


I occasionally use rhythm, but usually in songwriting. My poetry... I feel like it doesn't need too much of a rhythm as long as it doesn't sound like twenty cats biting each other's tails when I read it aloud. I dunno, I consider it a style.

I'll post my favorite song of mine. I wrote it a year ago, but I still love it.


You Always Were My Savior


Please donít leave me.
Please donít leave me.

Iíve seen the waves
Of dreams to come.
Futures of pain;
Live life for one.
Dreaming nothing,
Wishing fear.
Falling: bodies,
Blood and tears.

But I canít believe it all.

Memories; seeing my soul drowning.
Memories; seeing my heart bleed.
But you always were my savior;
Can you help me through this need?

Dreaming through the soundless melodies,
Lying helpless in the night.
Wish I could believe you see me,
Tell me that youíre still all right.

But I canít believe it all.

Memories; seeing my soul drowning.
Memories; seeing my heart bleed.
But you always were my savior;
Can you help me through this need?

As you see me
Bleeding, crying,
Wonder what youíd think of me?
Please. Donít. Die.

Memories; seeing my soul drowning.
Memories; seeing my heart bleed.
But you always were my savior;
Can you help me through this need?

As I cry out in the night;
Hear your memory, itís all right.

Memories; seeing my soul drowning.
Memories; seeing my heart bleed.
But you always were my savior;
Can you help me through this need?

But I canít believe it all.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 6:11 am  Reply with quote

Y'know, I'm afraid to post poetry anymore, 'cause most of you probably think of me as an 'emo'.

BUT MEH.

This one's kinda... sadistic. And very unlike me. But I felt like it. So... yeah. Here is is...


My Dead Plaything

Get down on your knees.
Beg for forgiveness from me.
I will rip your sadness from you
And make it my joy!

Inch closer to me,
Hold your wrists out before my eyes -
I will whip them with the thorns
Of every rose you left in my veins!

See your blood as it trickles?
Fill a goblet with the sweet aorta.
Shatter the glass in your fist,
Fracture your own bones!

Dance in the rain with me.
I will disease you with my touch,
Poison you with my caress.
I will kill you with your own sickness!

Don't you want to beat me?
Don't you want to hit me?
Don't you want to fight back?
You. Are. Mine. To. Command.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 6:19 pm  Reply with quote

SemiGoth wrote:
Y'know, I'm afraid to post poetry anymore, 'cause most of you probably think of me as an 'emo'.
They think i'm "emo" as well, and well I just ignore it. But I do like your poems Semi, they are awesome!
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Heh, that reminded me of Slade...
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 4:08 am  Reply with quote

I honestly don't believe in labels, I just like to joke about emos, chavs and whatnot, so please never take me seriously. XD
I have absolutely no skill in poetry, so I rarely read it, but I actually really like your dark poetry. There's been quite a few lines that I really love, like the ending here;

"Don't you want to beat me?
Don't you want to hit me?
Don't you want to fight back?
You. Are. Mine. To. Command."


Love it, don't know why, just do. lol

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:35 pm  Reply with quote

Thanks, guys. :3

TeenTitans4Ever wrote:
Heh, that reminded me of Slade...


Wow, you're right. o.o

Now for a short poem...

February

Last year I dreamed of months before
Never stopped to see my gore.
I dreamed of horrors he instilled
Upon my breath, through the chill.
This day I dream the horrors 'gain
Chilling bloodshed into rain
My innocence was taken thrice
Again, again, again the heist
Now see, he doth come back again -
Killing me: not loss nor pain!
So tie thy beaten into sleep
Witness murders in thy dreams.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 11:42 am  Reply with quote

NECROMANCY. -poof-

I felt like posting more poetry. (:

This one is in a song style.

Silence of Stars

Bubbling from the frothy tongues
Of waves and nonserenity
I sang the oceans one more time
To break my notions onto me.
Washing over handhold cliffs
And passerby upon the shore
Singling out the rocky clips
Of feathered angelwings before.

Lullabies are branches calling
Strangers singing heartfelt rhyme.
Doves in air's candlelit path:
"All the stars will meet in time."

I wish for all the people dying,
Leave your emptiness behind.
And believe you'll find what you wish
Frozen in a halflit time.
Drinking down the wretched sorrow
As bleak loneliness resides
Breathing out a broken stupor -
Never what I wished from life.

Lullabies are branches calling
Strangers singing heartfelt rhyme.
Doves in air's candlelit path:
"All the stars will meet in time."

Above us lies a canopy
Of pine and juniper precise.
Ending time to see what comes next
And we'll speak another night.

~ ~ ~

This one's higher up on the not-kid-friendly scale. Involves raping, killing, and eating a poem. ...That sounded odd.

Reluctant Enlightenment

I never called myself a poet,
But you insisted on
Advertising my true self
And whoring out my last clean cells.
You told my zen side
It was good
For writing blather
In your classes
Where you kill cats
With "Prose"
And emphasize
The show.
Tell me of the
Show of hands -
Who out of you
Would maim my title?
Turn the poet, as you rang,
Into the prostitute
Of adjective
And metaphor?
Sell my freeverse virginity
Without the Creator's consent?
Rape my rhyme and mangle it?
Of course, first you'd force-drug it.
Pump tranquilizers
And blood-blocking
Alcoholic deathbed
Into every stanza.
Kill it with the diseased tongue
You ran over every inkmade,
Kill it with the dirty hands
And rusty nails you chopsticked meaning with.
Eating entrails of poem
Like pork fried rice
With connotation as a side dish
And denotation as a
Refillable soft drink.
And when you fill on meaning
That you created,
Thinking it is truth incarnate
Instead of a body stuffed with hot air,
You tear its layered attire
Of chainmail paper,
Garments of pencil,
Down to skin of sounds.
You strip it bare
And leave nothing untouched -
Inside nor out.

~ ~ ~

I need to write more poems. I had hoped that I had made more good ones than this. :/

Oh well.

Enjoy if you'd like to. ^^

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 6:55 pm  Reply with quote

I liked both of them Semi, especially the last one. I like the emotion you put behind it, and IMO, it's your darkest poem to date. I personally like the darker side to poems, and it was nice to read a new poem from you. Just as awesome as ever. Smile
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 9:15 am  Reply with quote

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I liked both of them Semi, especially the last one. I like the emotion you put behind it, and IMO, it's your darkest poem to date. I personally like the darker side to poems, and it was nice to read a new poem from you. Just as awesome as ever. Smile


Thank you~

That poem's one of my personal favorites. ^^

Ehh. Here's one I just wrote today. It's about twisted thoughts and self-hate, mostly.

~ ~ ~

Recognition
And the lack of the self will wreak destruction on the body.

Envenomating instances
And losing parts of me, I've raped
Each part of me into a doll
And scraped the flesh inside.

And you told me that I gave you ink
To pen the map that showed the way
While I painted walls with poison
And drank the acid rain.

And since I've turned my body
Inside out again, again
You speak not but the hourglass
That grinds oblivion's walls.

Shallow water is swallowed by the tide
And where does the ocean end
But at the death of the sun
Which lies on its coma in silence.

So the body will become destruction.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 10:46 am  Reply with quote

...
That is...
wow! You're a great poemest...if that's a word! I didn't read the full title, but I saw the poetry on the index, so I clicked it. It's pretty good, though, kinda scary, and you might wanna put a rating above it that way kids no which one not to read if they click. But just because you post something scary and emo doesn't mean your emo or that people will think you are.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 11:58 am  Reply with quote

KristyStar wrote:
But just because you post something scary and emo doesn't mean your emo or that people will think you are.

Actually, she is emo. Well, she was. I don't know if she's still emo or not...

I like your poems, Semi! You Were Always My Savior is still my favorite, though. Smile

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KristyStar
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 12:02 pm  Reply with quote

Oh. But wasn't she just saying I need to stop posting or people will think I am emo?
Meh. Don't listen to me. I'm a weird 6th grader!

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:50 pm  Reply with quote

Emo is just a stereotype, I like to say that she's slightly dark. Smile And darkness can be a good thing. And I also enjoyed this poem and your welcome Semi. Smile
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:03 pm  Reply with quote

Thanks, guys. <3

TeenTitans4Ever wrote:

Actually, she is emo. Well, she was. I don't know if she's still emo or not...


I was behaving like the stereotyped emo personality, madam. </monocle>

XD I'm a semigoth. Hence the username. Actually, optimistic semi-goth. It's a random label I use to describe myself. Basically, I like dark/scary things, but I can be hyper/happy at times.

Hopefully we don't get a bunch of weirdos calling themselves that label someday. I made it up to say that I don't quite fit into labels, so I made up my own to be annoying. XD

Oh. And KristyStar. I put a rating in the title (not sure if you noticed. ^^; ) and I try to put warnings above the darker ones. Just so you know. (:

I wish I had more poetry to put here, but this is mostly a blatherpost on silly labels. I'm kinda in a writers' block.

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